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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 11:16:04 GMT -5
Post by Ceuseri on Aug 17, 2006 11:16:04 GMT -5
Okay, I have this little sister who adors bedtime stories, and I made up one about an angel called Oronia, who had died as a girl and wandered the world. If someone was near death, or wanted to die, she take their hands and carry them to the skies. I wrote a poem for her about it aswell, so I guess I should psot it here. --- Her eyes, her wings, her expression; dead Her bleeding feet too tired to tread Perched atop a mountains peak Sealed mouth, forbidden speech Her hands clutched round her dying dove Netted gaze and frozen love Streams of tears, shuddered grief Weight of hope, snow on leaf Lays her head down, waits for the night Slips out of life, loses the fight Still holding her bird in a curtain of hair As slowly she rises into groping air Showers of dreams fall as tears from her eyes Moans of loneliness, soothing of cries She wanders the world, hunts down the lost Healing their hearts at such little cost To grasp the child's hand anf float up to the end Oronia will find those with sadness to spend --- I know it isn't very good, but it's one of my best. ^^
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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 11:19:49 GMT -5
Post by Reiyn on Aug 17, 2006 11:19:49 GMT -5
That's so prettily written! As I said to Mischief, don't mock your poem-writing-skills! It's very pretty in a haunting sort of way. -can't find the right words- <333333
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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 11:26:39 GMT -5
Post by Ceuseri on Aug 17, 2006 11:26:39 GMT -5
Aww, thanks lots, Reiyn! <33
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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 11:30:13 GMT -5
Post by Reiyn on Aug 17, 2006 11:30:13 GMT -5
<3333 You deserve it. Your poems are good!
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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 11:46:37 GMT -5
Post by Mischief on Aug 17, 2006 11:46:37 GMT -5
'Tis spiffola! I really like it.
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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 11:59:52 GMT -5
Post by Ceuseri on Aug 17, 2006 11:59:52 GMT -5
-feels very proud-
Thanks lots, both of yous. -hugs-
<3333
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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 12:02:32 GMT -5
Post by Reiyn on Aug 17, 2006 12:02:32 GMT -5
-tackleglomps- <3333333 to you too!
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Oronia
Aug 17, 2006 12:05:28 GMT -5
Post by Ceuseri on Aug 17, 2006 12:05:28 GMT -5
Lol! <3
Hey, Reiyn, would you be interested in temporarily adopting Fang, until I get back? I can trust him with you, I know you're roleplaying style pretty well by now. ^^
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