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Post by x.RåVéÑ.x on Sept 3, 2006 17:12:44 GMT -5
Just a random poem I wrote in five minutes out of boredom.
Do you feel better when she falls to the ground? Muffled sobs and breathing? Sound. Blood her heart bleeds deep inside, For the power she cannot find.
Do you feel better when she cries at night? Gotta break free, but can't win the fight. Silent screams inside her mind, Weeping for the love she's groping to find.
Do you feel better as she prepares to leave? Last scent of perfume, the jingle of keys. Make-up gone from the bedside table, Power regaining, resetting her fable.
Do you feel better as she drives away?
Not bothering to wave goodbye. And you see why. As your hate and abuse melts away, Her life returns, ready to face, A brand new day.
Of her future...
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Post by Panic!-Rin's-At-The-Disco on Sept 4, 2006 4:07:31 GMT -5
Nice poem Raven
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Post by Ceuseri on Sept 4, 2006 7:04:57 GMT -5
Crap? What d'you mean, a crappeh poem! It's brilliant, Raven, the Rhythym and all is fantastic! <333
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Post by •♣Alli♣• on Sept 4, 2006 14:17:14 GMT -5
It's so pretty =^_^= Don't see why you think its bad...
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Post by Mischief on Sept 4, 2006 14:21:32 GMT -5
I luff it!
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Post by Reiyn on Sept 5, 2006 16:01:38 GMT -5
-stare- That's not crappy at all! It is the awesomefulness. <3
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Post by Shadow of Darkness on Sept 9, 2006 6:49:45 GMT -5
AGREED!!
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