Cat's Eye/Black Heart

[Reiyn]

Two random short poems -

Cat's Eye
Cat's eye, in the dark,
Bite them now, leave your mark.
Pain, suffering, without end.
Awful things that you cannot mend.
Scream loud, now, and scream long.
Don't try and say that I was wrong.
Cat's eye, close in fear,
Knowing that their end is near.

Yes, I know, Cat's Eye a creepy, disturbing little poem.

Black Heart
Black heart wings, pure as night.
A battle won, another fight.
Black heart dreams, terror true.
That all will one day come to rue.
You never know what you will find,
With black heart things, inside your mind.

[•♣Alli♣•]

o.o nice

[Ceuseri]

Awersome!
How d'you do it?
The rhythm is perfect, the rhyming is fantastic aswell.
And the ideas...eery, but unique and attention-grabbing
I particularly like the Cat's Eye one.
It makes me think of Rin's avatar where the eyes just disappear,
Leaving bloody sockets where they were.
...ew

[x.RåVéÑ.x]

Same here. O.o

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[Ceuseri]

Lol, Rin showed me about three pictures of cats and wolves with their eyes gouged out.
Cheerful person, Rin.
O.O

[Shadow of Darkness]

That's really good.

[Panic!-Rin's-At-The-Disco]

I know i'm very cheerful. Nice poems Reiyn
Nothing wrong with this one
Or this or my avatar.

[Ceuseri]

Ewwwww...

[Reiyn]

-tackleglomps each and every one who posted one by one-

Arigato, all of you! <333333333333

And, Rin, those piccys are very much a little on the creepy side...

[Reiyn]

-legasp- I just realized that I'm now a senior member. -falloverdiehappy-

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Wow, I posted a lot in these 29 days of membership! XD