tigerlily
New Member
What is worth living for???
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Post by tigerlily on Sept 24, 2006 16:36:26 GMT -5
Name: Tigerlily
Age: 4
Gender: Fae
Appearance: Brindle colored with stripes like a tiger from the brindle, bright yellow eyes, white on tips of ears, black on tip of tail, white up the forehead, and scar across chest.
Personality: Is brave, skilled hunter, strong, lets no one push her around, doesn't take anyone who's going to stupidly pick a fight, is nice and sweet with males, but does sometimes gets testy with other Fae's but only if there is a real reason.
History: Was a fight picker when she was younger, but was mostly the one who always got in trouble, got no respect what so ever not because she would start a fight because she was born from and omega and the alpha male and all the other pack members hated me because my mother was the lowest of the low strength, rank,bravely, and spirit wise.
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Post by Magick on Sept 25, 2006 7:59:30 GMT -5
Uh, okay then. Could do with being a little longer- the History especially. :/ Also- you should stick with the person choice. Example- to start off with you were saying 'her' and 'she' then ended with things such as 'me' and 'my'. But...its your first profile here, and I guess you'll get better as time goes on... †-Accepted-†
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