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Hope
Sept 2, 2006 10:17:34 GMT -5
Post by wolflover6 on Sept 2, 2006 10:17:34 GMT -5
Name: Hope Age:4 Winters Gender:Female Pelt: All black except white on tip of fur Optics:Greenish blue Siblings//Parents ((If deceased)):None
History:
Hope looked at the remains of her pack.A bone here,some teeth there.It was all too sad for Hope.She held her tears.Her pack and parents were killed by hunters.She was the only one who survived.
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Hope
Sept 2, 2006 10:27:30 GMT -5
Post by Panic!-Rin's-At-The-Disco on Sept 2, 2006 10:27:30 GMT -5
You could do a lot better!!?
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Hope
Sept 2, 2006 10:57:54 GMT -5
Post by wolflover6 on Sept 2, 2006 10:57:54 GMT -5
So am I declined?
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Hope
Sept 2, 2006 11:53:15 GMT -5
Post by x.RåVéÑ.x on Sept 2, 2006 11:53:15 GMT -5
[cneter] I agree with Raoul. You could do a lot better. Personality, history AND appearance please. [/center][/sup
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Hope
Sept 21, 2006 11:25:25 GMT -5
Post by Ceuseri on Sept 21, 2006 11:25:25 GMT -5
In answer to your question, yup, you're declined. But You can change this. I know you can put a LOT more effort into this. It really is skimpy. Try and stretch it out. I have a tip that I use and often sevres me well. Write a kind of story putting the appearance, history, personality and appearance into it. That way, you have a bio that is pleasureable to read and usually quite good. This site is for Semi-literate to Literate. I'm afraid that this bio is neither. *{Declined}*
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